Mr.LogicToast 21 Posted January 4, 2017 hey, all you guys should definitely check out my newest song!!! [MEDIA=soundcloud]https://soundcloud.com/lxgikmusic/boozt-350[/MEDIA] 2 Kypari and Forest reacted to this Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
OneGlove 54 Posted January 4, 2017 "check out my soundcloud bruh" 1 Egossi reacted to this Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Forest 309 Posted January 4, 2017 hey, all you guys should definitely check out my newest song!!! [MEDIA=soundcloud]https://soundcloud.com/lxgikmusic/boozt-350[/MEDIA] Not bad, though I personally found that the second loop that kicks in at 32 seconds to be really out of place; causes this huge disconnect with the melody and sounds out-of-place and somewhat jarring throughout the song. Not sure if it's the sample used or if it's just the structure of the loop itself, but just thought I'd throw that out there. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Mr.LogicToast 21 Posted January 6, 2017 thank you forest for the advice m8 :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kypari 579 Posted January 8, 2017 No offense, but I'm not a fan. Might have something to do with my music taste but here is some constructive criticism: That diminished note is really unpleasant to hear. I'd recommend changing it to something in the same key that isn't diminished. Doesn't kick in. When it does, it's very unsatisfying because the texture isn't nearly as thick as you would expect. The ending is kinda lackluster. Maybe try a perfect cadence? You definitely have the capability with software like this though. I can't do shit on music software myself so kudos to you for that! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Rawr12 4 Posted July 26, 2018 nice 2 Thorax_ and Shadower reacted to this Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
