Im_Aspire 0 Posted September 19, 2011 Am I a "Good" Poet? (feel free to use any of thus work, just inform me on this thread) I Need Someone I need someone to hold me tight Through dark of night, Who won’t go ’way At break of day. Someone whose love will mend the seams Of broken dreams, And give me back The trust I lack. For love, it holds the magic key To set me free, To heal my soul And make me whole. My Body my body is a walking representation the outward visual caption of what it means to be me from the outside looking in at times I hide from you but mostly what you see is what you will get Scream of Silence Encompassed by grief, as darkness surrounds, That deep inner scream of silence's greed; Life's knocks and falls hit with a startling scream, A man on his knees, drowned tears of sorrow. Life path alight with true maternal star, Nursing the ailments of a childhood grown; A wise word spoken and a strength to lean, Guidance only sought on her apron strings. Smiles of kindness held the children's esteem, A higher branch on their family tree; Fear now threatens their peaceful existence, The safety net's cast to capture his fall. Death has stolen living ties of Love's bond, Free from suffering, tomorrow's sun's warmth. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Otherworldly 2 Posted September 19, 2011 Scream of Silence Encompassed by grief, as darkness surrounds, That deep inner scream of silence's greed; Life's knocks and falls hit with a startling scream, A man on his knees, drowned tears of sorrow. Life path alight with true maternal star, Nursing the ailments of a childhood grown; A wise word spoken and a strength to lean, Guidance only sought on her apron strings. Smiles of kindness held the children's esteem, A higher branch on their family tree; Fear now threatens their peaceful existence, The safety net's cast to capture his fall. Death has stolen living ties of Love's bond, Free from suffering, tomorrow's sun's warmth. Sounds like an average day of jailbreak. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Im_Aspire 0 Posted September 19, 2011 Sounds like an average day of jailbreak. 0.o what?! ---------- Post added at 10:57 PM ---------- Previous post was at 10:51 PM ---------- Ahah random post oth? I don't get it.... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Otherworldly 2 Posted September 19, 2011 ---------- Post added at 10:57 PM ---------- Previous post was at 10:51 PM ---------- [/color]Ahah random post oth? I don't get it.... It's as I said it. When you wrote that I thought of jailbreak, but in a deep sense. Your childhood gone as you rot in jail getting shot during FRLR Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Im_Aspire 0 Posted September 19, 2011 Ooh, well what the ♥♥♥♥ does the "my body" poem have to do with JB xD ---------- Post added at 11:03 PM ---------- Previous post was at 11:02 PM ---------- I do, kind of see where you are comming from. But in the mean time i need to get to sleep, and dream about someone gifting me Nuclear Dawn on steam... <3? xD Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Speechluss 1 Posted September 19, 2011 Ooh, well what the ♥♥♥♥ does the "my body" poem have to do with JB xD ---------- Post added at 11:03 PM ---------- Previous post was at 11:02 PM ---------- I do, kind of see where you are comming from. But in the mean time i need to get to sleep, and dream about someone gifting me Nuclear Dawn on steam... <3? xD IM TRYING lol and this would soun legit as a rap Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Im_Aspire 0 Posted September 20, 2011 IM TRYING lol and this would soun legit as a rap :O thanks, i only get B's in poetry though >:| Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Heisenberg 1 Posted September 20, 2011 I like it. Really depressing though. :./ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Im_Aspire 0 Posted September 21, 2011 Yeah, i usualy write poetry when i am depressed, just another way of venting. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sexypedocone 0 Posted October 5, 2011 yo body is a wundaland baby Share this post Link to post Share on other sites